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Tuesday, April 14, 2020

Betty's Broken Arm

Betty’s Broken Arm 


One day Betty broke her arm because she jumped out of her cot.
She did this a week ago; but we didn’t know until yesterday! Betty woke up with a sore arm and it was all swollen then she went to the Doctors and they did a X-Ray to see if it was broken.
After the Doctors checked it they saw that it was broken and it took a very long time because she had to go to the Hospital as well to get the cast put on. And her cast is red; she needs to keep this on for 4 weeks. 
She wants to take it off already but we can’t.
We are going to sign it later on. What I want to sign on her cast is my name.

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 10:02 AM

    Hi Jackson,
    Great writing. Who is Betty? You haven't explained who she is in your story. She must be a bit miserable with a cast on. Are you helping to distract her by playing with her?
    Mrs Roach

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  2. Michelle WrightApril 15, 2020 at 7:56 PM

    Hi Jackson,
    Gosh what an interesting story you have written. Poor Betty. It would feel very strange having a cast on your arm for the first time.
    Did you sign your name? Does Betty still have it on?

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  3. Rachel FitzsimonsApril 17, 2020 at 11:53 AM

    Hi Jackson
    I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you could write all the things the Doctors did to help her. I wonder if Betty is a small person because she was in a cot? I wonder if she is feeling better.
    Rachel.

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